Some people think that "vertical City" is the best, where people live and work in tall buildings. Others think that "horizontal" City is better, where there are few tall buildings. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 有人以为笔直城市是最佳的挑选，大家可以日子作业在高层修建，有人以为水平城市是非常好的挑选，由于没有太多高层修建，评论两种观念，给出你的定见。

　　自创范文赏析：

　　首段：布景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家态度

　　Such is human to settle down in one’s favorite city. The construction style of diverse cities might satisfy different tastes of people. Perhaps no issue has led to such an endless debate as to whether or not residing in a city with tall buildings outshines living in the counterpart with small houses. This essay aims to prove that compared with the life in small buildings, to live and work in larger skyscrapers enjoys more visible merits

　　解析：

　　1. outshine v胜过

　　2. counterpart n 相对于的人或许物

　　3. perhaps no issue has led to such an endless debate as to whether or not …… 或许没有什么像是不是……相同引起大家的争议

　　4. reside in sp = live in sp = dwell in sp v寓居于某地

　　5. enjoys more visible merits v ……的优势明显

　　二段：正方观念的打开

　　As an advocate of living in vertical city, my justifications are not far to seek. The most obvious advantage of living and working in tall buildings is that people’s health can be better ensured. In other words，residents or workers could, to some extent, stay away from the agonies brought about by city noise or air contamination. Another merit coming from undertaking a job or inhabiting in vertical city is that people might have a merry mood. By that I mean, the employees can feast their eyes on the city landscape from those tall buildings when they need to have a relaxation. Meanwhile, residents can enjoy plenty of sunshine if they live in lofty constructions. To make the final point, as far as the city development is concerned, tall buildings will have a major part to play in reducing the pressure of housing shortage and meeting the requirement of population explosion. After all, those small buildings never fail to occupy the precious and limited land resources

　　解析：

　　1. stay away from the agonies brought about by …… v远离由……带来的烦恼

　　2. live in lofty constructions v寓居于高层修建

　　3. In other words = by that I mean v换言之

　　4. never fail to occupy the precious and limited land resources v一向占用宝贵的有限的土地资源

　　5. feast their eyes on the city landscape v纵情赏识城市的风光

　　三段：反方观念：

　　Some people, however, might take a skeptical attitude towards my stand. Some people might argue that horizontal city is a superior option for both city’s future and individual well-being. Another argument might be supported by some people is that tall buildings are not universally suitable for all cities, especially for those underdeveloped towns because tall buildings fail to synchronize with the proportion of population and the financial budget of the local government. Still, I have to concede that small constructions are never without their merits. As for the old, living in skyscrapers might create real inconvenience for them. At the same time, working in high buildings sometimes makes it hard to escape if some uncertainties， for example， earthquake or fire occurs.

　　解析：

　　1. take a skeptical attitude towards my stand v对于我的态度持有置疑的定见

　　2. is a superior option v是非常好的挑选

　　3. are not universally suitable for v不是遍及合适……

　　4. fail to synchronize with the proportion of population and the financial budget of local government v未能和城市人口比例以及地方政府的财政预算保持一致

　　5. might create real inconvenience for v给……形成真实的不便

　　6. some uncertainties n一些不确定的工作

　　尾段：

　　My stand is that developing vertical city is a better choice for a city’s development in the long term. If people are asked to make a choice, I believe the vast majority of them will have a liking for working and living in tall constructions.

　　解析：

　　1. buildings = constructions n修建物;修建

　　2. have a liking for = have a preference for v喜爱……

　　3. the vast majority of them n他们中的大多数人

　　创造感言：

　　12月6日雅思写作为新题呈现，思路拓宽略有难度。本题写作和维护陈旧修建无关(尽管猜测热题中包含是不是应当撤除陈旧修建)，许多网络“名师”再次宣扬各种压中标题，暗笑无语。我猜测标题及共享语料库的原意是协助童鞋全部备考，拓宽思路，提高实力。

　　写作凭仗的是点滴堆集的脑筋风暴和驾御言语的才能，而非幸运压华夏题。高分作文的要害无非是思路加言语。精彩表达可使文章在思维不变的情况下异乎寻常，这篇文章写作对比炫技，刻意使用一些亮点表达，(由于标题的思路拓宽较难)。

　　我为新东方雅思频道的自创范文写作现已坚持8个月，这种惯性来之不易，不管新题呈现仍是旧题改写，极力写到完满，在此过程中，精进写作才调，建立强硬自傲。和人的比赛是简略的，和时刻的比赛才是最难的。烤鸭之路很艰辛，可是咱们要有坚信，在你圆梦的路上伴你一路前行。

　　Tip：12月雅思写作最后两场猜测近期发布，请重视雅思频道。

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