如何写出托福作文高分句?
2015-05-20 09:58 | 编辑：川外外语培训中心　　来自：未知　
导读：新托福写作高分的规范之一即是娴熟运用各种句型，那如何写出托福作文高分句?太傻留学托福频道小编带您一起了解。 榜首，精确的语句表达 1. 句型剖析 英语的句型包含以下几种，简单句、复合句、并排句、并排复合句等。在新托福写作中，通常运用复合句，辅以并
新托福写作高分的规范之一即是娴熟运用各种句型，那如何写出托福作文高分句?太傻留学托福频道小编带您一起了解。
 
榜首，精确的语句表达
 
1. 句型剖析
 
英语的句型包含以下几种，简单句、复合句、并排句、并排复合句等。在新托福写作中，通常运用复合句，辅以并排句和并排复合句，当然必定要有简单句，做到长短句相结合。下面摘抄几个语句给咱们知道并剖析一下复合句和并排复合句。
 
a. Even though I usually know what I have to say, I cannot always express myself correctly in English.
 
这句话是一个复合句，由even though引导的退让状语从句。
 
b. This challenges me to prACTice my spoken English, with the result that I can complete the speaking tasks more fluently and quickly.
 
这句话中是一个复合句。with介词构造中，有一个that引导的同位语从句对result进行解说阐明。
 
c. I think this is less than ideal because any differences in opinion become personal conflicts, and therefore that might jeopardize the employee’s job.
 
上句话是一个并排杂乱句。and 衔接了两个语句，是一个并排句;because引导的原因状语从句。
 
d. Shallow writing is indicative of weak critical-thinking skills, and such writing, which is often described as “sophomoric”, receives low mark.
 
这句话同样是并排杂乱句。由and衔接两个语句，变成并排句，再一个which引导的定语从句。
 
2. 有疑问的语句的罗列
 
考生写的语句简单呈现三个疑问：一是运用破碎句，二是运用连续句，三是语句衔接不精确。
 
1). 破碎句
 
所谓破碎句，即是语句不完整，通常是没有谓语(或者说谓语是动词的非谓语方式，如分词)，或者是从句独自成句。
 
破碎句：She singing alone. (无谓语，singing是如今分词)
 
精确句：She is singing alone.
 
破碎句：He did not come. Because he was sick. (从句独自成句)
 
精确句：He did not come because he was sick.
 
2).连续句
 
所谓连续据，即是两个语句直连续在一起，既未运用连词，也未运用精确的标点符号。
 
连续句: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than fACTory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.
 
精确句一: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than fACTory workers. However, they have greater freedom in planning their time.
 
精确句二: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than fACTory workers; however, they have greater freedom in planning their time.
 
3).语句衔接不精确
 
所谓语句衔接不精确，即是两个独立的语句之间以逗号衔接，这是不合英语语法的。精确的做法是以连词、分号、冒号、句号等衔接两个语句。
 
不精确句: Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, there is no change in the composition of the chalk.
 
精确句： Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, so there is no change in the composition of the chalk.
 
第二，高分表达
 
除了在句式上长短句相结合精确表达外，朗阁海外考试研究中心主张新托福考生要运用一些特别的句式，以使句型多元化。句型多元化也是作文得到高分的条件之 一。除了咱们之前经常提到的高分句式，如倒装句、着重句、状语前置、插入语等，笔者还提出别的一个句式的多样改变，即主语多元化。下面笔者将罗列几个语句 归纳介绍前面四种句型，而要点剖析主语多元化。
 
正常句： Luck only works in extreme cases.
 
倒装句： Only in extreme cases does luck work.(否定词坐落句首的倒装。)
 
正常句： The internet provides people access to the latest information.
 
着重句： It is the internet that provides people access to the latest information. (着重the internet)
 
正常句： The environment has been deteriorating severely along with the development of industry.
 
状语前置句： Along with the accelerating development of industry, the environment has been deteriorating severely.
 
正常句： However, new zoos try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space.
 
插入语： New zoos, however, try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space. (连词however做插入语)
 
主语多样
 
1. 她俄然想到了一个主见。
 
She suddenly had an idea.
 
通常情况下，考生会立刻对这句话进行翻译，基本不会动语句构造。但是以人作为主语的英语语句老是不能够很吸引人，所以这个语句假如略微做下修正，今后面的 宾语“主见”做主语，这个语句会发作一些改变。 来历:考试大-托福考试An idea suddenly occurred to her.
 
2. 他开车心不在焉，简直闯祸。
 
He was absent-minded when driving, and almost caused an accident.
 
这句话依然是拿人做主语，略微改一下，把心不在焉这个形容词的名词方式做主语，会大不相同。
 
His absence of mind during driving nearly caused an accident.
 
3. 美利坚合众国创立于1789年。
 
The United States of America was founded in 1789.
 
这句话没有任何过错，但是不够多样，能够用时间作主语。
 
The year 1789 witnessed the founding of the United States of America.
 
第三，有用句型
 
在文章的最后，朗阁海外考试研究中心为咱们罗列几个新托福考试中能够运用的套用句型，为一些写语句摸不着条理的考生供给帮助。
 
1. It pays to make great efforts to prepare for TOEFL-ibt.
 
尽力预备新托福考试是值得的。
 
2. Nothing is more important than to receive education.
 
没有比接受教育更主要的了。
 
3. The reason why the white-collars suffer increasing work-related stress is that they pursue work achievement in career.
 
白领压力日益添加的原因是他们在工作上有所寻求。
 
4. It is time the related department took proper measures.
 
(虚拟句式)相关部分早该采纳恰当的办法了。

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